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MY HOMETOWN
      
       Batusangkar is a big and interesting city. People familiar with the city of Batusangkar culture, caused by some of the most important cultural,
        Batusangkar is my hometown, there have many regions. And my located in batusangkar is Supayang, the place is far from the center of batusangkar but there have a good view.  In there we can find green field, and many tree in the corner of way.
      Batusangkar has a cold weather in the morning and hot weather in the noon, if we will go out in the night to see the view; you should wearing jacket because at night the weather became cold again.
        Batusangkar is the same with other place. it has a history place, like pagaruyuang, and batu angkek-angkek. Pagaruyuang is a beautiful place,
Visiting the Palace Pagaruyuang same with invited to trace the history of Minang society. Inside the palace we can be seen heritage object and there is where we can learn the history, from politics to culture. Pagaruyuang has characteristics Minangkabau. The located is beautiful to take some picture and not scarce the tourist visits this place.
      People in batusangkar all most of them be a farmer, when the harvest time come my aunt allow me to accompany her go there. In the way, we find many hard ways and dangers way. Because that we must be careful. And after that we go to river, we enjoyed the nice view until we feel bored.
       The next is about Batu angkek-angkek, it is a stone which is considered to have supernatural powers and can give an indication, if anyone can lift the stone, her/his request will be granted, but it is not always come true. Just believe to Allah because Allah the omniscient
      At night many people around there sometimes play “SALUANG” and the people are friendly and life to help anybody. Their always make a joke because that they said they are family.
        According to me, my hometown is a good city, they are close and comfortable, and I’m waiting you in my hometown. :)

7 komentar:

Yuni Arnida mengatakan...

I think your essay is good enough.
but,, it can be better if you put the pictures in paragraph that tell it..

Rahmailis mengatakan...

Okey, thanks for your advice, I hope in the next essay i will do the best than this.

Giiya Erinaa mengatakan...

"The located is beautiful to take some picture" I think it's good to you to change this sentence with " According to me, this is a good place to take some nice pictures".


"At night many people around there sometimes play “SALUANG” and the people are friendly and life to help anybody"
I think it's good to you to put comma between saluang and the people, because both pf them is not related.

I think that's all from me,..
:)

Rahmailis mengatakan...

okey gya, thaks a lot for your comment,
i will improve my vocabulary to add the good statement

MiLLa MuLtin mengatakan...

i want to give some suggestion to your essay,it better to give more information about culture in Batusangkar, because at the first paragraph you explain about culture, but you don't show information about it.

so far your essay it interesting for me,
because your essay, i know some places who really nice that i don't know before,,

ok, that's my commant,
thx.....

Aulia Fitri mengatakan...

your posting about hometown is good enough..
but at paragraph 5 line 6th, you wrote "some picture"
i suggest to +s after picture..

:)

Helza_Hardyanti mengatakan...

ami
before you write next paragraph do not forgot "dot" --> paragraph 1st to paragraph 2st

if you write "caused" do not use "coma"

change the mane of Batusangkar to the other name,you just write Batusangkar to began the paragraph --> paragraph 1st, 2st, 3st and 4st.

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