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comparison essay

RAHMAILIS (18259)
NK-2 / 2010
Comparison essay
Telephone or hand phone
All of people need technology in their life. Without technology and skill we cannot do anything. Now, to get some information is easy. It is because of skill and technology communication like telephone and hand phone. We can know the condition in other region just use them. Actually they have a same function, it is the media to get information but they also have some differences. So we will talk about it


http://www.google.co.id/search?q=TELEPHONE

First, we talk about telephone. It is usually use in some place especially in your house, it has cable to connect internet in your home. The signal is also powerful and clear voice. Telephone always on in old weather, it never off except the cable not set. If we want to know where is someone who we are call, they will not lie, because sure the people who answer the phone is stay at home. Besides that, telephone can help you to know what happen in your house when you are in other place.

Telephone still has the worse, we cannot bring it when we will go somewhere because it has cable and the size is large. It just possible to call someone but the other kind of telephone can use to send a message with a small capacity. It does not have media to take a picture or play game and something else.
http://www.google.co.id/searchhand+PHONE

After the telephone is familiar, a small thing like telephone came. But they are so different; the people call it hand phone. The size is small than telephone also we can bring it whenever and where ever. Hand phone became a favorite thing because it has many applications and nowadays we can use hand phone to do anything. We can take some picture by using the hand phone, we can send a message to our friend and we can save our music in memory. It is so fun.
Every day we use hand phone, sometime without conscious we spend much money to buy credit card. We became wasteful person because of that. Forget to do assignment because play game in hand phone. We became addicted to always use it. It is can give a bad effect to our brain.
Actually telephone and hand phone give a positive effect if you can manage and control your activities with them. If you cannot do it, you will lose and became addict person. Be careful to use it. They are able to change your life, a better life or bad life. Choice the good one.



9 komentar:

Adnan Chucklaz mengatakan...

it is a good essay but, be careful to choose the word...
"All of people need technology in their life"
it is better all people...

be careful of your grammar..
"It is usually use in some place especially in your house, it has cable to connect internet in your home."
the correct is " it usually used...."
it is passive and passive use V3...
be careful...

please comment my blog too...
thanks
:)

Siska Febrina­ ­ mengatakan...

ami,,
your essay is good enough.. but it has a little mistake...
in paragraph 2 "is usually" i think without "is"

in paragraph 6 "play game" i think add "s" after game.

revisit it again..
n keep spirit... :))

Aulia Fitri mengatakan...

ami, your essay is good enough..

i like reading your essay, but you need begin the first word in paragraph 3 with "second", nest paragraph with "third"..

because miss lina said like that to me..

keep practice..!!

ntimuth mengatakan...

Interesting. Be careful with the punctuation and grammar.You're language is still like Indonesian style. ^_^
I need your comment, too.....

Anonim mengatakan...

your mistakes
"All of people need technology in their life"
without of
"It is usually use in some place"
put s after place

MiLLa MuLtin mengatakan...

amie,,
so far your essay is good enough,,
but keep pay attention about grammar, diction and punctuation mark,,,

that's from me!!

keep writing!!
:)

Anonim mengatakan...

dde amie,

your essay is good enough.. but it has a little mistake...

pay attention with your grammar and punctuation .
I am very interested about it :)

keep writing .

dewi putri rahmayani mengatakan...

Hi,Amie..
Your essay is good..
But keep pay attention with your grammar..
Just reread and revise it to make it better than before..

That's all from me.
Thank you.
Keep writing. :)

maya.puspadini mengatakan...

hiii ami,,

i think you blog is good enough...

it will be better if you make it with more ideas,,

i find many mistakes about it for each pharagraph,,,

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